Random shounenai from the mind of s2m, #2...

[slr2moons]

See my lovely new icon?? Ahhh yes, nothing like rivalry to make for a spicy pairing. And of course, I ganked this userpic. Apparently I'm a horrible icon filch. But I couldn't resist, so....*stares at her new icon and sighs most happily* Besides, it has bearings on my post!

Before I submit the slashy BL fun, an intro: About three weeks ago, my fanfic-sempai stariceling posted a yaoi/shounenai/BL/slash ficlet to her journal. The fic starred the two male leads from her all-time favorite anime and manga, Tantei Gakuen Q (yes, I've mentioned it before). I enjoyed her story quite a bit...so much so that it inspired a plot bunny of my own. So I wrote a sequel and posted it to her journal!!! And a few days later, she in turn wrote a sequel to that!! Heeheehee!! It's fun to inspire each other, ne??

Now, my original version is still on her journal, but I wanted to spell check tweak it, which is why I've re-posted it here. If you don't have time to read Star-chan's beginning, my chapter can stand alone--you don't even need to know the fandom, really--but if you want the whole experience:

1. Read Star-chan's chapter one in her post here. Yes, my sequel is in the comments of that post, but it's not the polished version that I'd rather you read. For that...

2. Come back and read my sequel here.

.oOo.

It's All an Act, You Know

Kyuu watched from the corner of his eye as Ryuu delicately nibbled at an octopus-sausage. Ryuu's pale and graceful hand held the chopsticks in that almost feminine manner which always made Kyuu’s pulse race. Ryuu’s teeth were white against the dark red skin of the sausage. When they cut into to the firm meat, Kyuu softly moaned. As Ryuu's lips pulled the sausage into his mouth, Kyuu's tongue touched his own lips in a slow lick.

Ryuu swallowed. Kyuu found the movement of the other's throat completely erotic. Kyuu stared, hypnotized, until Ryuu noticed and stared back with puzzlement.

Kyuu met his gaze and grinned, then deliberately lifted the stolen drink to his own mouth. He took a deep, long pull, tilting his head back, his eyes holding Ryuu captive. He swallowed once and kept drinking, even when a drop of juice escaped the corner of his mouth to trickle down his jaw and neck. With satisfaction, Kyuu saw Ryuu's lips part slightly, and his breathing quicken. The other boy finally ripped his gaze away, his face bright red.

Ryuu stared to the side and wordlessly held out his napkin.

With a gasp of breath, Kyuu finished the bottle. He took the napkin from Ryuu, his fingers brushing the other boy's skin. Kyuu wiped his face and neck with a disarming laugh.

"I really like this flavor of juice! How about you, Ryuu?"

"Ummm..." Ryuu fiddled with his bento box, still avoiding Kyuu's gaze.

Kyuu grinned. "Here, let me open yours for you!" Without waiting for an answer, Kyuu snatched up the unopened bottle and twisted off the lid. He took a quick sip, smacked his lips in pleasure, and held the bottle out to an astonished Ryuu.

Smiling his most innocent smile, Kyuu laughed. "This one tastes even better, Ryuu! Have some!"

"Ummm..." Ryuu stared at Kyuu, then at the bottle, whose opening was still moist from Kyuu's mouth.

"Go on!"

Ryuu's blush returned with a vengeance. He took the bottle from Kyuu, paused for a second, then drank.

"See? I told you it was good!!" Kyuu laughed.

"Umm..." Ryuu set the bottle down. "Yes, it was good." He picked up his chopsticks, taking two tries before he could grasp his last octopus-sausage and lift it to his mouth. He paused, cut his eyes to Kyuu, and softly added, "I like that...flavor...too."

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3. Return to Star-chan's journal and read the third chapter here.

Hope you enjoy!! And I think it's fun to compare our writing styles. ^^V